ho-kay so,i figured it was time to bite the bullet and just get this posting process going. here's what i've been working on so far... i was really digging your inks, and so i was trying to create a bit of color and energy beneath them, but right now it's coming out a bit more muddy than would be hoped.
your new hand/glass/pour section is getting spot on, so i went ahead and chopped that into the older draft and added a few more highlights as well. you've greatly improved the definition of the figures on your new draft, but i kinda like the background bar portion as well as the original foreground girl figure from the 3rd(?) draft a bit more. i like her skeletally arm a bit more than the beefy version you've got in the new draft. your new bartender's coming out quite well i might add.
speaking of adding, i shoehorned in 4 beer ads as well as a first go around of her barcode/tat. i've got a couple more logos i could add, but when i was trying them out on her shoulder and upper arm, they really just contributed to the overall cluttery theme i seem to be mired in.
we wrapped up finals yesterday (hooray!), so aside from a bit o whip-crackery and swashbuckilation later today i'll have a lot more time to help work on this.
ps. it's been raining here the last few days (what?! in san diego?!), but as soon as the sun comes back our friendly neighborhood spider-girl had best keep an eye out for some beach-based-baddies... heh heh.
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